Maple Story~

This is video of my favorite game~!!!

무한도전 비빔밥 광고~!

I chose this video for many reasons. First I chose this video because of introduce the korean food to every body and the another reason, that i like "BIbimbab" so much because i eat this food for 10years. Second i like the actor of this video because they are famouse actors in Korea. They make this video in the New York because they want to introduce the korean food, "Bibimbab". Final reason that i like this video is that this video makes me happy.

Welcome to Grammar! Writing Sample...

Caring

When i was in the Korea i was very kind to my grandmother because she is so old and weak, so i must caring my grandmother. My grandmother is always alone at the morning and the lunch because my uncle and aunt o to the work.( Grandmother, my uncle and my aunt live together). I must buy the food, go to bank, watching TV and eat together with her everyday when i was in the korea. And this is true story when i was in the Korea 6 grade.

One day my grandmother was so sick, so i caring my grandmother for 3days. I make the food myself, i buy the food, I clean my room and i make the food for my grandmother. Few days later my grandmother become a healthy. When my grandmother become a healthy, i was so happy. I think i am caring person.

ESl 7 Unit 1 Final Project

Here is the Storybird that I created. It is called Catch that Stupid Mouse and it is about How did mouse get cheese:


http://storybird.com/books/one-leopard-live-in-the-savanna-he-is-king-of-sava/edit/


Here is the story that I  wrote from this story bird: 

                          King Of Savanna

One leopard lives in the savanna. He is king of savanna. He feels happy because he has sharp nails and scary eyes.

"I'm the king of savanna,” he said

He excited when he run. He is the fastest animal in the savanna because he has long leg. While he is running he can hear wind and can smell sweat.

"No one cannot catch me ha ha,” he laugh But he have one big secret.

When he sees and smells the meat, he feel disgusted and he scraping the meat plate. His secret is he doesn’t like to eat the fresh meat!

"I hate dirty meat ~!" he said

When he hungry, He likes to eat the clean vegetables, chewing the vegetables and smell the vegetables but if the savanna animal know this giant secret the leopard will not be king.

"I like vegetables" he said

But one day one black gorilla saw his secret and he looks happy. Soon he laughs.

"Hahaha your end leopard” Fat Gorilla laughs.

One day he sleeps on the small tree. Few minutes later one ugly gorilla come to the leopard. When the leopard close his eyes he can hear leaves sound and smells of trees.

"Ah... I’m so sleepy" he said

He smiles and laughs. Gorilla looks glad. We don’t know why he glad.

The dark gorilla is hideous and heavy. His stomach is quiver. We can smell gorilla’s dirty fur smell. Gorilla said

"Hey, do think your king of savanna? Hahahahaha"

Yellow Leopard is angry because the gorilla interrupts his sleep.

Leopard muttered, "Who are you!!!!!!!! If you don't say sorry I will eat your big head and wreck your legs~!!!!" Leopard roar.

The gorilla is little bit scare because he shouts very loud. I think everybody can hear his roar. After finish his roar, we can smell gorilla fur smells again. But he believes that he is not violent. 

"Don't lie, I know you don't eat the Meat Haha" Old Gorilla laughs

Leopard feel excited. Leopard showed his l bright teeth. When he showed his teeth, we can smell his teeth smell and his teeth sound.

"Really? Ok come here I will eat you~~" Leopard smile.

Crazy Gorilla realize that leopard can kill

"I'm so stupid~!!!" He complains himself.

After he showed his teeth, gorilla is scary "I... I will be back ~!!!!" the gorilla run away. We can hear his footsteps and his sweat smells.

Few days later in the silent forest. When we see the trees we feel pleased and we can hear waterfall sound. It smells forest. There are many tall trees and fresh air.

The leopard is feeling the exciting vacation because he wants to rest. He feels comfortable. When he sleeps we can hear his breath sound and we can smell fresh air. He said, "I like interesting vacation, I’m so sleepy"

Few minutes later he is hungry. He bring the big vegetables for eat. We can hear chewing sound again when he eat the vegetables and smell.” I like healthy vegetable so much" he said I think he never abandon to eat Vegetable.

But no ne knows that he like vegetables. This is important secret forever.

"Sh....this is secret" he said softly. He looks serious and we can hear bird sounds…

Here is a video of me reading my story: 

Here is my podcast :I am telling my story:

ESL 7- Unit 1 Reflection-storyteling

My opinion reading is just standing or sitting and read a story but if we telling the story, we must do the actions, change the voice and we must love our story when we telling the story. I think the recording our voice is the difficeult part to me because when we recording our self, it is funny and so shame. I think put the effects in our recording is the easy part to me because i know how to use it and we can easily find the effects, in the Garadgeband. When we telling the story, we must change our voice, some move(actions) and we must love our story. I think my podcast is not successful because when i record my story my voice is not clear and some wrong part. Also i don’t change my voice many times.I think i am proud of my podcast because i am doing my best. I think i use all term for this project. Yes i think i understand the between of reading and  telling the story because our ESL teacher told us so many times and we watch video about the telling the story. I think i enjoy the making the storybird when we make the story. It is so fun to make the story. I enjoy the pcking the pictures. I think i learn about risk taker because when we recording our self it is so shame but i did the recording, so i think i learn the risk taker.

Story reflection

                                                       Reflection of Story

Firstly, i used google doc, story board, blog and dictionary. I used google doc for share the idea and tell the teacher, what i done and tell my story to teacher. Also i used story board. I used it for show and tell my story. I used blog for download the picture paste in the blog and my instrument. I used dictionary for found the difficult words or similar words but dictionary is also difficult to me.

Secondly, I used many sites. I used story bird, blogger, flickr, gmail and youtube. I used story bird for made my story. I used blogger for made my blog. In blogger we can visit my friend's blog and also we can put the pictures. Also i used flickr for download the picture. This site have so many pictures, so it was easy to find the good pictures. Gmail is for use the Google doc. Finally we used youtube for watch the some videos.

Finally we used so many skills. I learned making story skills, put the adjective editing skills (we use 7 boy over board) , imagination skills for imagine my story, smell and sound. First i use making story skills for make the story. Also i learned put the adjective editing skills for put the 7words(realize, complain, abandon, wreck, muttered, quiver) and finally i used imagination skill for imagine my story.

Welcome To My Blog

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My name is Jeon and I am a student at Sinarmas World Academy. My favorite Movie is Harry potter. I like to play soccer. My best soccer country is Spain because there are best platers in Spain and i also like Uruguay. My hobby is listen the Music. My favorite Music is Korean Music. I always play computer games because computer is the best to me. I like SWA so much because in school so many friends i can meet and play.